loopy
Cymbals and one bass note that repeats. Not something exciting. Make loop more longer. More drums and more bass. That is all I have to say. See yah
loopy
Cymbals and one bass note that repeats. Not something exciting. Make loop more longer. More drums and more bass. That is all I have to say. See yah
Ok Thanks For the Comment I Will Try To improve my audios
Good good
Like guitars. MMX3? Could work very well in flash. Fuzzy a bit. Nothing else that is bad. You deserve a vote from me. 5 is usually what most ppl like. See yah
MMX3 = Megaman X3
I heard this in a video game :(
Maybe not exactly same but that beginning sound matches the video game song I heard so closely. Too many ideas used already so I can see why so hard to come up with something completely original. Sounds good but repeat too much.
Hi
Starts slow like you said. Like the snappy snaps. Slowly new stuff added on. Bad transitions sometimes. Too repetitive but a new style which is good. See yah
darkish
Uh oh. Your angry now? Don't mind zero voters. They zero everyone songs. Gotta deal with it. Song turned out good but not original. See yah
Yes, but when you commit yourself to something like music and you work your ASS OFF, there is little be celebrate about when a bunch of idiots come blowing through and zero voting your work. It's like a hooligan child coming into the office and shredding your recently finished paperwork. Oh well, back to the mind slaving board without a promotion! WOOPEEEE!!!
Good
Good but sounds familiar. You playing guitar is effort. Not my type. See yah
Well, I 100 percent composed this :D Dunno how its familiar... Thanks.
HGLKHG
You must be irish. Traditional music. Have not heard this style on NG yet. Good for little kid cartoon with a dragon or leprechaun in it. See yah
I have some Irish blood in me, but not much. It might work in a cartoon, but then again alot of music would. I've always loved Celtic music, and I've been studying the style recently... So I was hoping for a more helpful review. But all I got was your garbage.... heh.
video game sounds
Beethoven remix. Too empty. No excitement. Good note choices by beethoven not you. Some fuzz to. Sorry I don't like this. See yah
fast
Your fingers must be really tired from playing those triplets over and over again. I like classical parts of song. Not much of the triplet part because used too many times. Annoying sometimes. Video game song. When does this song end? Loopy. Much better than me though. See yah
yeah goth!
Finally another goth on NG. Hard to hear what vox is saying. Should have made vox lower pitch to make more creepy. I'm not scared. The reverb gives haunting feeling though. Not much of a beat. Add some more dark sounds. Vox loops. Unique song. See yah
While I prefer to create dark music and foreboding music, I personally do not consider myself "goth". I have a huge issue with LABELS like that.
While I agree with almost all your critiques it is pretty much impossible to remix the vocals. This song is one of the first I ever made on my OTHER computer. It is now my other computer because the hard drive crashed, nailing the coffin shut on all my samples I used to mix the song, and others like it. So I can't change that part; I hope the lyrics I included in the other response help you with understanding the song. As for a beat, I had no intention of creating a "beat" for it. It's sole purpose is to have a relentless, and creepy sound to the drums. I only wanted certain effects in it, so when decided how much "dark" sounds to place in, I opted to go lighter. Like I mentioned in an earlier review, the song was never MEANT to be creepy or malevolent. The song is supposed to give you the feeling... maybe this IS a song about killing the lady you love... or maybe it's about love, and just sounds kinda creepy. I will try to take as much of your advice to heart as I can. Hope you enjoyed it, and thanks for your review.
Carpunch
Hello ppl. Listen to my garbage. :o When I actually have some.
Joined on 3/30/07